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the meaning. "Full measure, and running over," seems to
have been the motto of his version. That he unconsciously
commits this crime on some occasions (although we think that
the very note which we are about to cite is a proof of his being
generally conscious of it) will appear from the following pas-
sage. Mr. W. alludes to it in his notes, by saying, I hope
that I have not weakened the force of this fine passage by
unnecessary amplification:' page 172. Our readers again shall
judge. In the first scene of the second act of the Medea, she
and her nurse are in earnest dialogue, when the latter says;
"Spes nulla monstrat rebus afflictis viam.

"MEDEA. Qui nil potest sperare, desperet nihil.
"NUTRIX.Abiere Colchi. Conjugis nulla est fides.
Nihilque superest opibus è tantis tibi.

"MEDEA. Medea superest! hic mare et terras vides,
Ferrumque, et ignes, et Deos, et Fulmina !"

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Nurse. Full oft affliction proves that hope is vain.
Then welcome black despair!
Yes, all is lost.

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Perfidious Jason scorns, and hostile Colchis

Rejects her fugitive. What now remains?

Medea. The lost, the scorn'd Medea! ocean's wave,
And earth's wide orb is mine! I hurl the lightnings,
I lift th' avenging steel! Th' infernal gods

Bow at my name and tremble.'

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Have not our readers judged? We will request their attention, then, for a moment. Even in the alternate iambics, before Medea's burst of exultation, much of the spirit appears to us not adequately displayed by the translator: but in that burst, how does the Roman transcend the Englishman! "Medea superest!" The lost, the scorned Medea!' mare et terras vides." Ocean's wave, and earth's wide orb is mine !'-Is mine how flat and nerveless ! « Ferrumque, et ignes." I hurl the lightnings,—I lift th' avenging steel· Bathos perfect. "Et Deos, et fulmina," Th' infernal gods bow at my name, and tremble:'-"the devils believe, and tremble."— Now, in the name of the gods, and all their thunders, why this borrowed periphrasis? Not to mention that "Ferrumque et ignes" are plain fire and sword; and that "Deos et fulmina," which nobly end the climax in the original, are, as we have hinted, neither more nor less than "the gods and all their thunders!"

We should not have exerted this our right of close questioning, (our readers, we hope, will not call it cross-examining,) if Mr. Wheelwright had not challenged a sort of comparison

with Corneille in this very passage. Now really "Le Grand Corneille," who, as an imitator, to say the most, (when we oppose him to a professed translator) had much ampler license for inserting his own thoughts, has been closer, it appears to us, even if considered as a translator, in his copy from Seneca on the present occasion. We quote the passage, after Mr. Wheelwright:

"Oui, tu vois en moi seule et le fer et la flamme,

Et la terre et la mer, et l'enfer et les cieux,

Et le sceptre des Rois, et le foudre des Dieux."

This indeed is poetry. "Le sceptre des Rois" may be engrafted, perhaps, from the following passage, but it is admirably engrafted; and we wonder how Mr. Wheelwright could preface such a quotation by saying, in allusion to his own version, Corneille, in his Médée, of which several scenes are almost literally translated from Seneca, is not more concise.' "Sub judice lis est."

We had marked many passages for similar censure throughout this translation: but we shall be satisfied with again admonishing Mr. W. of his sin of verbiage; and with quoting an instance of another species of offence, namely sheer idleness, into which he too often falls. It is impossible that even a maiden author could imagine the following lines to be poetical. They close the Medea. What a finale!

JASON (to MEDEA, when carried off in her winged Chariot.)
Pursue thy track sublime! And oh! record,
Where'er thou fliest, no deity dwells there,
Who gives to 'scape impiety like thine.?

"Per alta vade spatia sublimi ætheris :

Testare nullos esse, qua veheris, deos."

Here we must remark that a very obvious illustration from Martial might have occurred to Mr. W. (" nullos esse Deos," &c.) and we must add that his notes display but a meagre stock of parallel passages; though this is almost the only species of commentary which he professes to give. Moreover, we cannot always admire his taste. He panegyrizes, for instance, a passage in Glover's Medea, as a beautiful apostrophe,' which begins thus:

"Blast his perfidious head, vindictive lightnings :" -but de gustibus, &c.-The mode of reasoning adopted in one of the notes (in which a passage from the poems attributed to Rowley is adduced as closely parallel to a speech in Macbeth) does not strike us as particularly ingenious. In the first place, we do not think that the closeness of the parallel is very clearly

made

made out: (see the note, pages 183, 4, 5. vol. i.) but, for the sake of argument, allowing it to be so, what are we to say of the subjoined remark? If Chatterton's story is to be believed, Shakspere never saw the poems attributed to Rowley. I need not draw the inference.' Let us draw the inference. Chatter

ton's story is not to be believed. He forged the passage in question from a loose (not a studied') imitation of Macbeth*.We are not clear, on revising the passage, that we thoroughly understand what Mr. Wheelwright means by Chatterton's story:'-but the reference which we have made will enable the reader to decide.

We now come to the Octavia; a play, with all its faults, of which the subject redeems it from that listlessness of perusal which never fails to accompany the twice-told tales of the mythology. This subject, we need not remind our classical readers, is that of the repudiation of Octavia by Nero, and his marriage with Poppaa. The occurrences of this period' (as the translator observes, for we cannot exactly say the same occurrences) have been dramatized by two celebrated modern authors. The Britannicus of Racine is, perhaps, his happiest effort; and the fragment of Agrippina, by Gray, does indeed make us regret that we have no farther opportunity of judging what that great poet's classical taste would have enabled him to execute for the honour of the English drama. We cannot help thinking, as the strain would doubtless have been of much "higher mood" than that which inspired the Caractacus and Elfrida, that Gray would have effected something towards reconciling our lawless taste to the more correct models of composition: but, so ample is the field for discussion which this view opens before us, that we must be content for the present with a glance of it, and return to Mr. Wheelwright.We know not why he talks of Gray's fragment of a tragedy under the same title, having before mentioned only the Octavia and the Britannicus: but we conclude that this was a lapsus calami; especially as we read, in the notes to the Medea, a quotation from Gray's Agrippina.

The version of the Octavia is much better finished than that of the Medea: probably it was executed last; and indeed it bears evident marks of increased facility in composition. We augur well from this circumstance. Would Mr. Wheelwright practise still farther, and give us all the plays of Seneca, (only attending to the double caution administered above, against verbiage and carelessness,) we doubt not that we should have

* We beg to refer those of our readers who are yet interested in this question to our last sketch of it, page 35. Vol. Íxi. N.S. Number for January 1810.

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the pleasing task of recording his manifest improvement; and of thanking him for supplying a desideratum in English Litera

ture.

Out of the many successful passages in the Octavia, we select the following; of which both the original and the translation appear to us very beautiful. In her wretched state of desertion, Octavia exclaims,

"Quis mea dignè deflere potest

Mala? que lacrymis nostris questus
Reddet Aedon? cujus pennas
Utinam miseræ mihi fata darent ! *
Fugerem luctus ablata meos
Penná volucri, procul et cœtus
Hominum tristes, cædemque feram.
Sola in vacuo nemore, et tenui
Ramo pendens, querulo possem

Gutture mæstum fundere murmur." Act 5.

Surely this may be modestly compared with the famous complaint of the Nightingale in Virgil; or with any of those numerous classical passages on the same subject, which were so well collected in that anonymous pamphlet which overturned the celebrated Charles Fox's untenable hypothesis concerning the antient notion of the

"Sweet bird that shuns the noise of folly,

Most musical, most melancholy."

Let us now listen to the translator:

What tears are worthy to deplore my fate?
What nightingale shall raise the song for me,
In melancholy sympathy of woe?

Ah! that her wings were mine- then would I fly
From all my griefs, from factious multitudes,

And every haunt of sanguinary man.

Then, hanging lonely in the vacant grove,

Upon some slender branch, I would pour forth
Th' unceasing note of querulous despair.'

The next passage, which we shall present to our readers, is one of a different character; one in which the translator has, we think, shewn himself as capable of preserving the vigour and animation of his original, as its occasional pathos. Poppæa, in the fourth act, comes out of the bridal chamber, in extreme agitation and alarm, and returns the following answer to the anxious inquiries of her nurse;

*This is one of the closest classical parallels which we recollect to the touching exclamation in the Psalms, "O that I had wings like a dove."

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"Confusa tristi proxima noctis metu
Visuque, nutrix, mente turbatá feror;
Defecta sensu: læta nam postquam dies
Sideribus atris cessit, et nocti polus,
Inter Neronis juncta complexus mei
Somno resolvor; nec diu placidá frui
Quiete licuit: visa nam thalamos meos
Celebrare turba est mæsta; resolutis comis
Matres Latina flebiles planctus dabant;
Inter tubarum sæpe terribilem sonum
Sparsam cruore conjugis genetrix mei
Vultu minaci sava quatiebat facem :
Quam dum sequor, coacta præsenti metu,
Diducta subito patuit ingenti mihi
Tellus biatu: lata quo præceps, toros
Cerno jugales pariter et miror meos,
In queis resedi fessa. Venientem intuor
Comitante turbá conjugem quondam meum,
Gnatumque: properat petere complexus meos
Crispinus, intermissa libare, oscula.
Irrumpit intrà tecta cum trepidus mea,
Ensemque jugulo condidit savum Nero.
Tandem quietem magnus excussit timor :
Quatit ora et artus horridus nostros tremor,
Pulsatque pectus: continet vocem timor *,
Quam nunc fides pietasque produxit tua.
Heu, quid minantur Inferum Manes mihi
quem crucrem conjugis vidi mei ?”
" POPPEA.

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'Confus'd with dread
In visions of the night, my troubled mind
Uncertain wanders! Scarce the smiling day
Had left the world to darkness, ere arous'd
From placid rest and Nero's fond embrace,
Sudden I view a melancholy crowd
Who come to celebrate the nuptial rites-
All loose their hair, the Latin Matrons raise
Their loud laments; while 'mid the trumpets' din,
With threat'ning brow, the Mother of my Lord
Shook her blood-streaming torch by present fears
Impell'd, I follow-when, with sudden chasm,
The earth is bar'd to my astonish'd view!
And sinking deep, I see the nuptial couch
Amaz'd, on which I throw my weary frame;

The indolence of these three terminations is censurable enough,

unless indeed "repetition be the soul" of passion as well as of poetry.

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